Three Ways your Hometown can Help Your Novel

Diane Sherlock has provided one last guest blog. Next week, you’re stuck with me again. Until then, enjoy. Here, she weighs in with the role your home town plays in your novel. Nice little note—I get a bit of a shout out in this entry. See if you can find it. It’ll be like a treasure chest, or a scavenger hunt, but possibly not nearly as exciting.

3 ways your hometown can help your novel

Diane Sherlock—10 November 2011

News! The Rumpus just put up my piece on their series The Last Book I LovedNice Work by David Lodge, if you’re wondering. Lodge is a wonderful comic writer introduced to me by the brilliant Rob Roberge. I learned a lot (and was inspired by) reading and annotating comic novels by Lodge as well as Richard Russo, Carl Hiaasen, Zadie Smith, and others while I was writing my latest, Wrestling Alligators.  You can check out those and more annotations at Annotation Nation.

I’m from La Jolla, CA. It was a spectacularly beautiful place to grow up. La Jolla was the setting for my first book, Dead Weight, as well as my third, Growing Chocolate. I write about La Jolla because I love it, it’s part of me, but I also want to preserve some of my favorite places that no longer exist, including the garden of old family friends, long dead. The garden found a place in Growing Chocolate. I’m experimenting with changing that book into a YA (will let you know how it goes when I’m further in).

La Jolla also makes an appearance in Wrestling Alligators. There are three main characters, siblings who come into conflict: Alison, the oldest, a psych nurse, middle child Brian, a Wall St. strategist, and the youngest, Emma, a painter. At one point, Alison drives to San Diego. What better place for her to stay than the La Valencia? The hotel opened in 1926, designed by architect Reginald Johnson and cost $200,000. My dad used to have his annual office party in the Sky Room, which has a breathtaking view of the coast. More history? Gregory Peck used to host parties for the La Jolla Playhouse in the Whaling Bar. Raymond Chandler used the hotel as the backdrop to his thriller Playback. As long as I’m mentioning a mystery writer, take a look at Aaron Gansky on mystery vs. murky. On to the business at hand…

How can your hometown help your novel?

1. It will provide resonance in your writing. It’s a place where your first memories are formed, where you first explored the world, so those emotions are going to run deep and provide a goldmine of sensory and emotional experiences.

2. You know it and you know it in a way that a visitor can’t. Take a look at how it formed you. I grew up next to the ocean. The smell of the sea was always there. I was able to go to the beach after school whenever I wanted. My experience of the ocean is very different than someone who’s never seen it or from someone who never cares to. My childhood was spent building sandcastles, bodysurfing, running in the sand. When I grew up, I learned scuba diving and wrote a novel about it. Setting doesn’t only affect characters.

3. You know how to adapt it. If you want to create a fictional town for your characters, you can adapt your memories. Chances are those memories aren’t entirely accurate with the passage of time anyway. Use your hometown as a template for a fictional place and redesign it to suit your story.

One last look at the La Valencia

I’m going to have to visit soon…..

1 thought on “Three Ways your Hometown can Help Your Novel”

  • Diane Sherlock has some interesting points here. Seeing as my own hometown started as a safe, though not exactly picturesque, neighborhood. It is vastly different today. The town has become a haven of drug dealers, gang members, and other unsavory types. It has served as a great inspiration for one city in my fictional universe. Like my hometown, it is a desert community. It is infamous for being the best place to check if one is searching for weapons, illegal substances, or a night of cheap pleasures. It is not so much a melodramatic portrayal of the community as it is an honest one.
    Just to anyone not from that kind of place a general idea, there were girls who were excited to be named “The Next Lindsay Lohan” in my high school yearbook. I jest not.

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