Importance of Language

kayakMy last post was about the first of two constants in fiction—tension. This post will focus on the second: Language.

By that, I don’t simply mean English or Spanish or whatever language you choose to write in. Language is more a term that encompasses vocabulary, imagery, and figurative language. Though it’s of vital importance, it seems to be the thing that is most often over looked.

There seems to be a subtle (or not so subtle) difference here between what we’d term “literary” writing and “commercial” writing. If you’re unsure of what those terms mean, I’ll define them simply and basely: Commercial fiction is written to sell to a mass market. It is generally of less “literary” value because the emphasis is not on language or characters, but on story. Literature, conversely, has a much smaller market. The focus of literary works is more on the art of the story, the way in which it is told, and the overall lasting impact it has on the reader.

If we think of this in context of movies, “literary” works would be the ones winning the Academy Awards. They’re the ones that cause you to re-examine your particular view on a subject, the stories that sit with you for years to come. Contrast this with a summer blockbuster. You might come out talking about how cool the explosions were and how many people got shot, but beyond that, there’s not a whole lot of meat to the story. It’s more an excuse for special effects than to tell a story.

For me, language is the art of writing. Anyone can tell a story. We all have the friend who loves to tell them, but we never enjoy listening to them. It takes a special talent to tell a story in such a way that people want to listen. It takes a special talent to tell a story in such a way that the listener remembers it, re-thinks it, and ultimately comes back to listen to it again.

In “On Writing,” Raymond Carver insists that, “It’s possible, in a poem or a short story, to write about commonplace things and objects using commonplace but precise language, and to endow those things—a chair, a window curtain, a fork, a stone, a woman’s earring—with immense, even startling power. It is possible to write a line of seemingly innocuous dialogue and have it send a chill along the reader’s spine—the source of artistic-delight, as Nabokov would have it. That’s the kind of writing that most interests me.”

Me too, Ray. Me too.

He continues on later to say, “That’s all we have, finally, the words, and they had better be the right ones, with the punctuation in the right places so that they can best say what they are meant to say.”

Stephen King, in his autobiography/craft book “On Writing,” encourages writers not to make an effort to increase their vocabulary. The idea is that if we are actively trying to find a word to adequately express what we’re trying to say, that we may be trying too hard, and we run the risk of using and uncommon word that doesn’t fit the feel of the rest of the work. I go back to Raymond Carver. Many of his early stories are comprised of very simple language and descriptions, but they are some of the most powerful stories you will read. The language is simple because the characters are simple. Regardless, the emotional impact is not lessened by a smaller, more precise vocabulary.

Lastly, don’t forget the importance of imagery—describing the natural world, and even our thoughts and feelings, in context of our five senses. They are how we experience the world, and thereby are the way we must experience fiction. Far too many beginning writers forget this, or fall into the trap of clichés. They describe things in context of how they’ve heard them described, or read them described. There is only one cure for this: To live and experience.

It’s really difficult to write about a lake unless you’ve been to one, unless you’ve been on the green water on a yellow kayak. Unless you felt the warmth of the murky green water splattering your shorts as you rowed to the trunk of the fallen tree that dives beneath the still water until you can no longer see the moss growing in the grooves of the bark. To write about life, you must live life with your eyes and ears open. You must stop to smell the roses (pardon the cliché). You must savor your meals and try to adequately describe the different ingredients that went into the dish. You must let your fingers linger on the surfaces of the important things in your life, feel the texture, how smooth or how rough, how perfect or flawed.

The language of your fiction is directly proportionate to the power of observation. Do not be content to simply waddle through life. We must all, as Thoreau said, “Live life deliberately.”

Good writing.

11 Comments on Importance of Language

  1. dina rodriguez | March 11, 2013 at 2:29 pm | Reply

    It took me a while to understand what this was saying but i understand now. I think that this is mainly saying to be creative in your writing to not just say “the field” but say “the endless field with whisling grass”. Its important to make characters and stories stay with people forever.

  2. Dillon Miller | March 11, 2013 at 2:33 pm | Reply

    Language is often difficult for me to write. Its hard for me to set the mode of the story, and I think it is closely related to the fact that I may have previously misinterpreted the form of language.

  3. Language has always been a hard concept to grasp on. I am always writing stories that i would like to listen to, and others may not want to. what i learned in this blog post is that a story can be twice as intriguing when you use less specific details.

  4. Christian Beaman | March 12, 2013 at 5:35 pm | Reply

    Making my writing more creative and more in depth is a bit difficult. This blog really explains why I need to perfect and critic my work.

  5. janet anderson | March 13, 2013 at 6:35 am | Reply

    To tell you the truth i hate writing at times but that’s only because i didn’t understand it at first and i would write story’s and think they were fine but i had a lot of errors. This passage really helped me.

  6. JessicaRae Padilla | March 15, 2013 at 12:36 pm | Reply

    At first when I began to write I seem to just babble on about whatever I have in mind, but as I go back a d read what I have written I revise it to bramble to show and not tell and replace all $1-$5 words with $10 words. Mainly so I don’t sound stupid. But when I retread it after revising I seem to like it more and I feel readers like it more aswell when there is stronger vocabulary and imagery because it keeps the reader interested. But also the right amount of $10 vocabulary is important because once I read a book that has big words that every few pages I was looking in the dictionary trying to comprehend and by time I was done reading the first few chapters I didn’t really know what I had read.

  7. Summer Connell | March 15, 2013 at 7:20 pm | Reply

    Woah… A lot of big words. Anyways, I usually have a hard time describing things, even simple things like Pandas. They’re black and white.. See? I suck at imagery. Wait, Pandas are also fluffy. Close enough.

  8. I find irony in your advice to take time to smell the roses in order to avoid cliches. That said, you make an excellent point. Don’t get me wrong, vocabulary is great–different words have different connotations, and that’s where the story gets its mood. But a lot of beginners take it too far. They take that thesaurus and violate it. They get lost in the words.
    Getting lost is no good. Besides, sometimes the simplest words and phrases have the most impact.
    Don’t try too hard. Just put that pen to the page or your hand to the keyboard and get going.
    Write well, write often.

  9. De Zerae Fraijo | April 15, 2013 at 8:47 pm | Reply

    I honestly don’t think that I’ve had too much trouble with language.
    I used to think that the big fancy words were needed in order to create a great image; however, I was never able to find a “fancy” word to use. After all, I didn’t even know half of those words to begin with.
    With my writing recently I never use big words.
    I’ll use simple words, but intertwine them together to create an image that it quite remarkable.
    The younger may still be stuck on finding the right words, but the me now knows enough language to shift a dull description into a unique one.

  10. Drew Williams | April 18, 2013 at 6:41 pm | Reply

    Vocabulary is important to a book because having a large vocabulary means you are able to use descriptive nouns that don’t need adjectives. A book full of boring sentences like “Bob bought an apple” isn’t something I would read

  11. Its good to use descriptive words, sometimes there big or short snd simple. But it adds to the story and also helps describe events more clearly. Sometimes its not better to have mire action then language because people are only gonna remember action scenes, but if theres no language then nobody will know why there are even action scenes taking place.

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